写短文以"The place i would most like to visit"为题

the place i would most like to visit
umm, when seeing your question the city first comes upon my head is the charming city :california , once more , i've listened to such a sweet enlish song , to be frank it's deeply touched my heart , whenever i listened to it, the beautiful scenery will slipped my mind quietly , i once promised to myself if i can have such a chance to go abroad ,obviously , the priority choice i should give to california , from my viewpoint , it's so cute and fantasy, although i can search more details in the net , but totally wut i've seen is visionary and a long period away , true seeing is the most feat , am i right ?ofcourse , but wherever you wanna go , the first command is having the fund foudation , cos without money nothing can be afford , so i'm forced being struggling again then the bright future will being ahead /i suppose, lol !!!!!!!!!!!
hope can do you a favor !!!!!!!!!!!